Hi Ivan, Here’s my crit, as you requested. Right, I’m going to start with something someone once said to me: You’re a good writer, but you need to learn more about storytelling. Confusing, yes, but the best advice you will ever get. Now remember, everything I say here is my opinion and ... view book

Hi Jennifer, OK, well I think you know you’re writing a book for the most saturated genre around at the moment. To get a story like this published it will have to be VERY original. You have Twilight and its thousand twins to thank for that. ;> So let’s get down to business . . . You’re ... view book

Hi Si, right, finally got round to giving this a read. Because you are one of the best writers on the site I’m gonna be as critical as I can, because this is no doubt a great book, but I think just saying it’s perfect will hinder a chance of publication. Probably unlike most of the people on this ... view book

Dear Nick, an authentic Arabian Nights-esque fantasy here. I really liked this and if I had it in book form would definitely read it to the end if you keep up the quality throughout. You seem to have entered the world of Aladdin but made it darker and more grown-up. Your style is easy on the eye ... view book

Dear John, not sure if I’ve read this about a year ago or not, but I’ll give it another whirl as you are nearing the winning post. It does ring a bell. Anyhow, anything I crit on isn’t me being a smart-arse, I’d just like it to be in the best shape it can be for when HC have a ganders at it. Fi... view book