KC your HFG review Love the cover and the pitch promises intrigue and adventure alongside a love story which I suspect has a few hurdles to cross. Just my cup of tea. I read to the end of chapter 9 and will pop back later for more - You provide us with a beautiful first image of the valley... view book

Nathan, I get the cover, very clever and the pitch is intriguing. Okay, so I'm glad I don't live in Birkenhead...don't reckon you'll sell many books there. You present the image of Gary cornered on the platform, very well. Excellent dialogue and the way he attempts to edge away, physically and em... view book

Melanie, Your HFC review. part 1 I like the title, not only does it cleverly represent folks who are brought up in wrong "nests" it's memorable...good. Sorry, but I didn't quite get the cover...too red and apart from the significance of the joined hands in the romance aspect, I didn't see the lin... view book

Ashley, I like the cover, eye catching and very appealing to your target group. Short pitch is good and punchy, the long pitch dawdles a little...how about..."Maddy's never heard of the witching world until told the magic's disappeared and she's the only to bring it back. A victim of bullies, Maddy... view book

Tony, Returning your read. I read to the end of ch3. You set the scene for a quirky tale where the main characters Jesse and Katie both have rather "alternative" lives. The story of the cat, while given huge importance in chapter one, seemed to fizzle out by the end without any real conclusion, so... view book