Hi Andrew Very accomplished. Nice opening and good set up. I'll come back and read some more and keep it on my W/L and could well promote it to my shelf. I really like the humour - the Stuart U A section was very funny. Nice work. view book

Hi Mat David is a great character. This all trips along very nicely with some wonderful observations and skilled prose. Great ear for dialogue. If the trafficking and child abuse is a major part of the story I just wondered if we needed a teaser of some kind for that upfront? It's so difficult to... view book

Dai I love your work and agree with Des that it should indeed be higher in the rankings. I'm shelving on the basis that I think you need encouragement. Though there are faults [obviously - as there are with all works] it's refreshing that an author puts so much effort and work into creating an or... view book

A nice easy going amusing style of writing. It certainly underlines my desire never to set foot in a caravan or camping site again. LOL at the pervs by the pool, 20ft rule and lack of fire-fighting equipment. At risk of sounding like a school master good work. view book

As stated this is an excellent read. The interesting thing is that I clicked on the read book before reading the premise, and I may not have read the book at all if I had read the premise. Not because there is anything wrong with the premise, but simply because I would have viewed the book as being ... view book