I've fixed the formatting / punctuation as per Marita's advice (Thank you!) I also found I had loaded some chapters at the end on top of each other so there are now three more chapters if people would like to read the book again. Hopefully it flows much better now! view book

This is fun! You have really got the story telling rhythm going. Backed. :) view book

Hi Emma, I have just read the first three chapters of your book at one sitting and have only stopped because my parents are coming to tea tonight! I've put it on my watchlist (bookshelf is full at present) Very dramatic and the story roars along. I don't know much about the dialect of the time b... view book

Hi Julie, I wonder if the first chapter might be better broken into smaller pieces. The narrative seemed a bit long to me and kept moving from one event to another often with no clear connection. For example I wasn't sure who Miss Berks was and how she came to offer Rose a home, nor why Rose su... view book

This is a Women's Only Review Hi there, I've only read the first chapter so far but I have put it on my watchlist. I enjoyed what I have read so far. I found your use of language both literary and evocative, some of your images were particularly effective for example the "cold water escaping insid... view book