This is very powerful, mature writing. The story flows through all the lives and thoughts of each character. Ch 11 is very moving and surprisingly insightful for such a young writer. There are keen observations on the fellow passengers in Ch12 (Seems travelling on buses is the same the world over!) ... view book

Meticulous scene-setting. Love the dry humour in a Bottle of Chardonnay - 'Yeah, one line - and that came from 'Gone With the Wind'! These are really well crafted stories with convincing characters and intriguing twists. Welcome to a spin on my shelf. All the best, Dawn view book

Hi Traci. You have a very polished writing style - flows smoothly and carries you along. I love the tense courtroom scene - it poses questions and keeps us hooked. Punchy and pacy, you have a masterful narration and dialogue. Shelved with pleasure, Dawn view book

From the first paragraph I knew that I was about to relax into a really fun read! Have been reading it with a big smile on my face and it's the sort of book you read effortlessly from cover to cover. Really excellent dialogue between all the (very pleasant - warmed to them all immediately!) characte... view book

Hi SJbal - sorry for the glitch. What an arresting first chapter. You have created a most menacing and sinister character in Felkray. I love the juxtaposition of the atmospheric and brooding first chapter and the sunny, vibrant feel to chapter 2. Julia is a likeable, feisty and engaging MC, and the ... view book