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I grew up in a place not unlike the "Paradise Pointe" of "The Final Cruise." The park where I lived was even known as "Paradise Park.".

Although the book is 100 percent fiction, it is informed by stories that I grew up with.

I spent most of my first ten years within a redwood forest, and the next eight years I lived within walking distance of the sea. The places I describe, therefore, are as real as memories. I later became a seaman in the USN, so certain scenes were based upon real sea experiences as well.

My great grandfathter was indeed rejected by his father and became a merchant seaman. As for me, I was raised in earthquake country, and when I was about eight years old a redwood tree fell on my neighbor's roof. Somehow these things found their way into the plot.

Some of the "boyhood adventure" scenes were based upon my own adventures and others upon "facts" drawn from family lore.

Yet most of the foibles, sins, indiscretions and blunders of the story were thrown in for effect, as were some of the less admirable qualities of certain characters.

My goal was to write a unique and memorable tale. I hope that I have succeeded.

Like so many writers here, I am seeking to be published. Welcome to my Authonomy story pages.

On reading back, I see there are still a few errors in spelling or punctuation, but I think the final product is close at hand. I hope that you enjoy your reading.

favourite books


The Future of Faith (Harvey Cox), Mosquito Coast, Treasure Island, Moby D., The Family Orchard, Animal Dreams, The Power of One, Sister Water, From Jesus to Christianity, The Gnostic Gospels, The Origin of Satan, the Bible, Rescuing Jesus from the Christians, and quadrillions of other works, some of which I have even read.

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The Final Cruise

Eltopia Frank

"The Final Cruise" is a story of old maps and new territories, of odd, hidden treasures and one man's pursuit of happiness.


A youngster named T.J. flees Manchester in a wretched coal barge: Family conflicts and poverty drive him until, as an old man, he faces his final cruise.

Eccentric characters abound, such as the rugged and audacious "Captain Georgie", who explains life and religion to his. weather beaten, desperate crew.

They peer at an ancient map and a depiction of the Wheel of Samsara.

"Where shall we go?" Georgie asks. "The New Jerusalem? The Celestial City? The Lake of Fire? Would you like to sleep forever with a brother of Zeus?"

"How about the Holy Bible?" Someone inevitably asks.

Trouble follows, and the captain, exhausted, explodes: "That's it; I quit," he screams. "Let T.J. be your new boss!" A groan goes up from the crowd. "And his wife Elizabeth is now your new first mate!"

"No way!" A hundred voices exclaim. The sky darkens and thunder rolls and everyone panics. Captain Georgie presents a democratic dilemma: "Which way shall we go? Choose your own storm, men. ... And choose your own Heaven or Hell, by God! Be men for once!"

 

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I wrote 67 days ago

I was amused at the book description. Glad to see this book with a gold medal next to the icon. view book

I wrote 110 days ago

Kirk, thank you for commenting my story. In answer to your question, yes, I was in the US Navy and was raised on the California Coast, in Santa Cruz, California. The book you mentioned, "Two Years Befoe the Mast," sounds interesting. I will have to check it out, as I have not read it before. Best wi... view book

I wrote 111 days ago

A gifted writer: The two first chapters are powerful, captivating, exotic, and strange. This writer is a real story teller. However, I have read the first two chapters and did not see anything to place me somewhere in a historical context. I want to know when this took place, for one thing. It m... view book

I wrote 111 days ago

A gifte writer, an interesting lead, and what a setup, a publicicity stunt to outdo all others. I like it. view book

I wrote 147 days ago

I imagine the critics might say that the author lacks perfect control of the language, but I would remind them that scholars have said the same thing of the apostles and the writers of many of the New Testament books. Intellectuals might point out that many of the great themes being argued in the se... view book

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