Hi Jared this is chilling stuff and very well written. I can't say I enjoyed what I read, but you didn't want me to, did you? Very well handled. Good luck K view book

Hi Greg Well you asked for my version of the truth about this, so here goes: I think the plot you outline in your pitch is great. But, I’m afraid you didn’t quite deliver for me once I started reading the book. The action of the prologue is good stuff – you provide the questions the reader will... view book

Hi Tom, great concept, nice humour and a very smooth read. good luck K view book

Hi Jupiter I can't fault your imagination in dreaming this up, or the smoothness of your prose. The criticism I do have you can perhaps put down to me not being a Fantasy reader and being unfamiliar with conventions others would accept. All I can do is tell you why this didn't work for me. In th... view book

Hi Gerry The plot you outline in the blurb sounds great – very dramatic and with plenty of potential for the reader to get thoroughly absorbed in emotional twists and turns. However, as I mentioned in my message to you, I do have some technical niggles about the execution of the story. These ma... view book