Suspense, tension, well-written, good plot. Very descriptive and put you in the mood for more. I have not nit-picks. Good job and good luck. view book

Great opening paragraph, good hook and well done. Excellent dialogue, perfect beats. There’s no doubt this has been a labor of love..and probably an anguish for you at times. It has a fun feel to it and flows nicely. view book

Prologue: Perfect opening and hook. A terrible accident and young unprepared doctor rushing in with only his wit and small bag of supplies makes for a wonderful scene and opening chapter. The writing is very good, tension builds swiftly, and the pace is comfortable. I enjoyed the read and thanks f... view book

Wonderful opening paragraph and hook. The dialogue is excellent and the flow is very smooth. There’s steady building of tension that’s a lot of fun….where the heck did mum go? Great job view book

Well written, well edited, smooth dialogue, good flow, interesting premise. I particularly like your voice. It’s out of my genre but I enjoyed it. I have nothing useful to add. Well done. view book