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I agree with all comments saying this needs to start with Chapter 2. The trouble with Chapter 1 (and some of the later passages) is that it's all tell and no show. However sparkily written the 'tell' is, (and it is) it's like being fed a great meal instead of being allowed to use your own cutlery. I... view book
