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My biggest problem is that I am a storyteller and not a writer. I left school at 14 1/2 hating English. My English teacher taught us by making us do 14 pages of dictation, a T not crossed, an I not dotted, one piece of punctuation out of place and he would rip it up and make us do it all again, being slightly dyslexic didn’t help. It wasn’t ‘til later years that I learned the joy of being able to put pen to paper, finding I was able to express myself far better than using the spoken word. When I write a story now, I write what I feel, but my use of grammar is appalling and needs more editing that I want to give it. For me it is the story, and not the grammar.


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Ramblings of a Writing Fool

Pride James

A few short stories most to try and make you laugh.


I sometimes write just to pass the time, these are some of those ramblings.

 

The Brothers

Pride James

A story set in 12th century England and the Middle East tells of twin brothers who came to love the same woman.


Salah-ad-din, Commander of the Faithful, Sovereign of the East, has a neice but she is also the daughter of one of King Henry III advisors. Her father Sir Andrew D'Arcy, had been a prisoner of Salah-ed-din, but he had also been his friend. Sir Andrew had fallen in love with Salah-ed-din’s sister Zobeide. They managed to escape, and Andrew and Zobeide fled to England where she bore him a daughter, the Lady Rosamund. Until her mothers death Rosamund had spoken mostly Arabic, and her mother died two days before Rosamund's sixth birthday. When Salah-ad-din learned of his niece through a dream he had three times. The dream said that through her he would save the lives of a vast number of men, so he decided to bring her back to Damascus, no matter what the cost. Living with Sir Andrew are the orphaned twin sons of his younger brother, both of them love Rosamund.

 

The Necklace Saga

Pride James

A hypnosis session connects the 21st century with the Viking era with the pharaohs of ancient Egypt. Can you live more than once?



Peter Strijker, a Dane living in twenty-first century London, believes that, while on a visit to the town of his birth, he has been possessed by a sixth-century Viking. On returning to England he finds he is having dreams and flashbacks of the Viking’s extraordinary and exciting life.
He is so disturbed by this, he is doubting his mental health and his professional working future. Because of this he seeks help from a leading parapsychologist.
Under hypnosis, Strijker identifies with his alter ego called Ragnar of the Red Sword and tells his story. It is one of betrayal in love; of desperate deeds by land and sea; of exile from his native shore to far Byzantium; of his dangerous relationship with his employer, the regent Empress; of his love for an Egyptian woman he has already met in his dreams; of his struggles with Byzantium’s enemies, the all-conquering Moslem Arabs and of a dreadful punishment inflicted upon him.
Running through the story is the connection between Ragnar and the two artefacts he has stolen from a bronze-age tomb; a necklace and a sword.

 

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I wrote 620 days ago

I have never tried selling my stoies so the answer to your question is no, regards Pride view book

I wrote 643 days ago

I'm in the UK call me any time, What I have in mind is co writing. Regards Pride view book

I wrote 643 days ago

Hello Ian Just a hint for you, you use too many passive words the main one you use is was. I attended a meeting of editers and lireray agents and came away with the following hints, they may be of use to you. I am backing your story for content and the story itself. When asked, a group of editor... view book

I wrote 645 days ago

Hello Margaret First line para 2 "or else you know he would happily see" grammaticly incorrect. Line 2 para "still in the different language" I think you mean "in the same language" "Why would you go against not only our emperor, but OUT country." I really think you ought to try reading your sto... view book

I wrote 649 days ago

Hello Mavrick Just a few points in no particular order of your chapter 1. In the first part of your chapter 1 you keep using the word they, who are they,family, friends, acquaintances, who. instead of "ascending some steps," how about "ascending a flight of steps". You write, "but her haunted smil... view book

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