Tom, you know I love this. I'm typing with my thumbs here so I'm going to keep it short, except to say: look, I was here first! Cheers, Paul. view book

Very funny stuff, very dry. I like the cold, detached observation of the narrative. The house I now own ... okay, the house the bank owns ... when I first viewed it there was a used condom on the floor of what is now my bedroom. But the kitchen table? That would've given me second thoughts. The... view book

Okay Dave, you asked for it. Heavy-handed crit on the first chapter, again. Just the first chapter for now, I can go on if you want. I’m only going to focus on nitpicks, because that’s what you asked for. But to show it’s all in good spirits, I’m going to emphasis words in UPPERCASE, because it ... view book

Jesus, Pat - I need to get to bed, and you're not helping. How about a little bit of *closure* at the end of chapter fucking three? You know that's that standard authonomy limit. BUT. But, I am tired and my wife is calling, so I will go to bed now, so there. Engaging from the beginning, never... view book

Hi Ali - extremely well written, and deserving of a place on the desk. I normally spend a more time formulating comments, but my kids are all over me and Charles has left me with an empty spot on my shelf that needs filling. Will attempt to leave meaningful feedback later on. Cheers, Paul. view book