Great start for a very taught thriller, would love to read more. If I had any criticism, which is tiny, I'd not have called the man who entered the road an 'old man'. He was referred to as a tramp continuously later so I'd say a tramp entered, that would be in keeping and not confuse the reader. It ... view book

Liked the hook and went onto read the book. It's different but works well. Your description is also good. A little editing is needed to smooth everything out but that's nothing all the best books need that. Keith - Unit T view book

I loved the opening, the prose were just right and added so much to the story. Keith view book

I found this an interesting and very involving work. It is well written and immediately captures the reader with the precise description. At first I wasn’t sure if the timelines would put me off, where in actual fact I found them useful and I suppose in some ways reduced the need for explanation. I ... view book

I applaud writers who have obviously taken the time to research every detail of their work and make it as accurate as they can. This work is in that league, besides being very interesting and well written. happy to back. Keith - Unit T view book