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MonicaShear

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favourite books

Eragon series
Harry Potter series
The girl who could fly

And my favorite authors are Catherine Anderson and Christene Feehan

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Sahara Sparks and the Pool of ....

Monica Shear

The guardians to the earth could care less,an exiled angel prince,and a girl that a prophecy speaks of that is the worlds last hope.


If your looking for a quick little read,check out chapter 29. Has some of my most favorite lines of the book.



The world is failing,falling into destruction and peril.
An angel exiled from heaven,a child that noone really wants,can they together save the world? Friendships will be formed and broke,lives will be lost and from it all is the one chance to save mankind before its too late. One last shot for those all around the globe to stand together as one against the evil that threatens to destroy them all.


I know there a certain places where i am missing quotations or the grammatical conventions is iffy,but it is after all only a first draft :)
Please dont hesitate to comment.I am looking for major criticism so i can improve the book and my overall writing skills.

 

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Paul Beattie wrote 82 days ago

My new novel, Filthy Luca, has risen over 5000 places in under two we....

Davidmauriceware wrote 82 days ago

Hello fellow Authors and readers. I was sitting here trying to think ....

AntoniaMarlowe wrote 149 days ago

Hi Monica I'm in the middle of a mojor edit, anticipatinh HCs revi....

Shieldmaiden wrote 166 days ago

Good news! My book is going to be offered for free tomorrow on Kind....

mkildor wrote 176 days ago

Monica, thank you for your very helpful remarks about Hour of St. Mic....

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I wrote 315 days ago

I love that you messaged me,I cant belive that i have missed such a great read!Your main character is very likeable and there is so much mystery surrounding the entire book that i will be back to read more.Im 5 staring this. view book

I wrote 342 days ago

The idea of Christmas being boring almost made me run away,but i stayed and finished out. I love how you seem to mix seemingly spotless descriptional phrases and fluid dialogue all in one. A craft i wish i could get the nack of. I will be back to read more,and perhaps next month I will clear a shel... view book

I wrote 350 days ago

I think if this was a book,and i had a kid,i would definatly use this as a bedtime story. view book

I wrote 351 days ago

I agree with Antonia,my mind tends to wander and i found myself getting lost in the pretty font. view book

I wrote 351 days ago

In the middle of chapter 17,after stenton is branded,you ssay stneton said instead of Grubber.I doubt hed be complimenting his own branding :) view book

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