Hello Betty. I was so excited to read this, as this is a particular era in history that I love. You have obviously done the leg work with your research. That said, I felt the writing fell flat. The opening scene lacked the sort of horror and tension it needed. The characters of Pierre and Louis... view book

Just my kind of story, this. Loved it. Cheers! Jaime view book

Okay, tell me the truth. When you wrote that scene with Zarell aiming for the bottles while Tobias was standing in front of them, were you watching Wanted? I jest, I jest. As usual, you have a poetic voice that I love. I really like the concept of this book, and I love the voice. For nano i... view book

You've a lyrical style that was a pleasure to read. Good luck with this. It is deserving of much success. Cheers! Jamie view book

Excellent characterizations here. A wonderful and, I think, important book. I could see this appealing to a very wide range of people. I love your setting and your lovely descriptions. And as dialogue is the bane of my existence, I couldn't help but notice your effective use of believable dialog... view book