Read the first four chapters and happily backed, by some stretch the book I have enjoyed the most on authonomy. Nothing really to add except I'd say the story and pacing is good enough to not need mini hooks at the end of each chapter (Which occasionally read a little like after-thoughts). But thi... view book

Hi Katherine, this is really well written. The premise is naturally comical and you exploit it well with lines such as 'chisel a srongly worded letter' The dual dangers of volcanus and being collected are introduced early and suggest adventure. Pete maybe comes across as a bit whiny, we know th... view book

Hi Bradley, this is a good piece of writing. The exposition is well handled and the opening chapters certainly keep you on your toes, with the different characters, pov's and information to process. I really like it when novels throw the reader in at the deep end. I like the fact that a lot... view book

Hi Roger, This is really good. Almost reads like you are stoned, with different thoughts and ideas popping in saying hello and then popping out again. It makes the prose very readable and I flew thru the four chapters. I laughed when you described Zak as a 'finger one step removed' its an enjoyab... view book

Hi this is Jaspers little sister Lucille: The first thought that crossed my mind was how did they suddenly change from land people to water people. A brief explanation would be nice it doesn't have to be scientifically accurate just believable. I very much like your descriptive prose and aqua... view book