Hi, your first chapter is enough for me to shelve this - but i will be back for more. As I would like constructive critcism, I hope you dont mind if I do the same to you. The writing is excellent, the blurb is not! And for something as good as this, it should be. hope you like mine, Louisa view book

Hi there - Just read the opening chapter of your book and loved it. And consequently backed it. It flows very easily and you have a very good turn of phrase (I especially like the personification of the conscience who gets on the greyhound bus). Just one tiny comment - you use unhurried and hurr... view book

oh god. am right there with you. view book

Hi, your pitch enticed me and have added you to the watchlist to read in my spare moments (which also happen to be while I am at work). A couple of initial comments on that though - confusing grammar! is this meant to be(!)? (i.e. quirkiness?) or is it a mistake? edward beat did not have a good ... view book

Hi Well done on making it to the desk. Your writing has a Joanne Harris feel to it and is wonderfully evocative. I am just wondering how easy it will be to get another travel novel of this genre published. Wouldnt it be an idea to fictionalise the story using all your great anecdotes? Louisa view book