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(rafica_4ndaye@yahoo.com) My name is rafica i saw your profile toda....
Hi Cheri: Can i interest you in reading Illusions of Comfort? Regard....
Hi Cheri I wonder whether you would take a look at "The Holy Innoc....
Cheri, I cannot thank you enough for your valuable critique and the t....
Just curious are you related to Dana Moffitt?
I agree with others who've commented that this is an important and impactful story, BUT... To me, the writing (pace/ plot, character development, dialogue, grammar, and punctuation) makes it not worth reading to the end. I look forward to coming at it again after you re-work it with an editor.... view book
Ourageous story that MUST be shared!! I am anxious to see where you go with it... AND >> I'm sending up a prayer for you, as you journey to get this "junk" from your soul and fiber onto paper!! Cheri Moffitt view book
I, too, read this start to finish in one setting and enjoyed the story immensely. It definitely shows your courage through rough times and SHOULD be shared with others who face similar demons. I have a couple general recommendations: (1) to slow the pace (especially through the first few chapter... view book
Good stuff, JW! I agree with comments, re: needing to complete the package... but the ingredients are DELICIOUS! I look forward to seeing where this goes. :-) Cheri Moffitt view book
What a wild ride this one is!! I just tore through six chapters and look forward to coming back for more... view book
