Jack is a great character who keeps me coming back for more. You need some more editing, but there's good stuff here. Backed. Iris view book

Nicely written. I like the first-person present tense--it adds to the intensity of the situation--and that you don't get lost in some personal Fantasy world; I was right alongside Hron every moment. I didn't mean to read as much as I did, but I found myself clicking the new chapter automatically. ... view book

I don't like a lot of young adult because it's often dumbed down with too much that's overstated, but the first two chapters of your book have captured my interest! This is more like The Phantom Tollbooth--it's readable for all ages, has silly but enjoyable humor, and an engaging plot. I'm putting... view book

I love the dreaminess and uncertainty of Ch 1, the sarcasm and wit of Ch 2, Destiny's inescapable clairvoyance in Ch 3... Changing the voices but keeping first person perspective, the story considers Troy's evolution by exploring different moments in his life through the eyes of his housemates. It... view book

Beautiful writing style, insightful interview; I just wish you'd post the whole book! I am absolutely backing this. I wish I had more compliments right now, but am still digesting what I've read. Excellent. Iris view book