Sorry for the delay, but here's my half of our read swap. This isn't the kind of book I'd usually read, but the pitch is attractive and I enjoyed the book even more than I thought I would. You have a clever way of using one or two strong descriptive words where other authors might be tempted to use... view book

Sorry for the delay, but here are my comments as promised. This is everything I want in a YA novel. There’s excitement, intrigue, immaculately written narrative, an original storyline, and I loved the way you separated Coo’s (excellent name, by the way) experiences from the main plotline using ital... view book

This is a refreshing, realistic, and utterly likeable take on Christian fiction. Honey's initial difficulties make us feel sympathy for her - always a good way to start a story - but she is flawed too, and that becomes clearer as the story progresses. I can't wait to read to the end, to share in her... view book

I read everything that you've uploaded and wanted to read the next part, so well done with that! You write very well, and I found it easy to understand the relationships between the characters and how they developed throughout the story. I particularly liked the idea of Giovanni cheating, and Kara... view book

I like this a lot. It’s a refreshing, interesting, and imaginative take on YA fiction. Your writing is smooth, realistic, and clearly well thought-out. Shelly is a likeable character and her difficulties help the reader to develop sympathy for her. The line ‘laughter fluttered around like gnats’ i... view book