yaasehshalom

yaasehshalom

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first registered 07.09.08

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i have a job working with books, although if you knew what it was, maybe it wouldnt sound so exciting.

i am a socialist and this obviously influences my writing although i hope that what i write is still enjoyable without coming across as propaganda. Ive had an interesting life which has obviously influenced what i write about.

i've written a range of stuff and i put my first full length book "damaged" on here about three years ago which will be part of a trilogy (Im writing the second now) i know the beginning part is crap which is why i am going to upload it again so i can have some suggestions on what to change as i want to send it to publishers. it is written from the POV of many characters and there is no way that is going to change so if you dont like it dont even bother commenting on that fact (although if you find it confusing in parts say so)

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HI yaasehshalom, My stepson annoys his mother by being a socialist. ....

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I wrote 1018 days ago

hey, i've added this to my watchlist - im really busy both with the book and with my revision - (Im doing final year exams) so will not get a chance to read it, the pitch looks really good ............ x view book

I wrote 1019 days ago

This is very good, the dialogue is excellent and very funny. One suggestion - simply from reading Chapter 1, I think you should make Rick's voice (ie in the prose, not the dialogue) a little bit less genteel, maybe a few less big words and expressions like "of note" - tis all up to you though, i am ... view book

I wrote 1020 days ago

hi there mate, sorry not been on authonomy for a while - i just wanted to say, i would be really interested in reading the whole thing because your book was one that really stood out for me on here, i hope that that is OK! xxx view book

I wrote 1185 days ago

Hiya - this is very good. You capture the family tensions brilliantly! A couple of points: i saw a few spelling errors - for example, it should be "shiksa" - and that doesn't actually mean maid, it usually means a gentile woman ... also - it should be chaim weissman ... (I think - might ne... view book

I wrote 1186 days ago

I really like this - chilling, but written with humour and I love the references to things that's happening now. You demonstrate what could happen very well. view book

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