Hello, I read the first three chapters and part of the fourth. Sorry I can't find my glasses otherwise I would read more. I enjoyed reading this, it has the intrigue, its exciting. I will say that going from the prologue to the first chapter was a little confusing. I read the whole dream sequence t... view book

I read the first chapter. The first few paragraphs are very confusing, though I suppose your character is confused so it fits. You paint a good picture of what happens to poor Phil, the carjacking is well done. The tone of the characters are kind of stereotypical but then again, I guess they have to... view book

Hello! I read through the first half of chapter 5 and I am thoroughly impressed with your book. The language and the flow of your writing is fantastic. I applaud you with your ability to adapt to the English language, it is something even native speakers have difficulty with. I enjoyed your charact... view book

So I read some of your book, I am not a big fan novels completely based around romance, though I do have a soft spot for Wuthering Heights. I found that you have a tendency to use adverbs a lot and I don't feel you really need them there, well not so many at least. they get cumbersome in reading and... view book

Hello, I read the first four chapters. So overall I think that you have something that will be engaging for children. The first chapter has a Harry potter feel to it though that diminishes as you read on, which is good, because if it continued I would probably have stopped reading. I have a few que... view book