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I'm 26 and started writing a few years ago. In 2007 I graduated with Distinction from an MA in Professional Writing and since then I've been working on my novel, From The Darkness, about a man who discovers that his estranged son of 15 years is in prison.

The first three chapters were up on this site for a couple of months earlier this year and the feedback I received was really encouraging and helpful.

I removed them in November because I found it hard to write while managing to reciporicate reads. I'm working on a complete first draft at the moment and hope to have it completed by June.

In the meantime, I'm hanging around on here to read a little and comment. I like to think that I offer constructive criticism, and hope that it's accepted in this way. I think people often believe that if a fellow writer picks holes, they believe their own work to be perfect. For me, at least, this isn't the case. It's likely I'm just picking up on something that's been suggested to me and would appreciate being pointed out in my own writing.

favourite books

Quite a few, but recently read include the following:

‘The Hours’ by Michael Cunningham

‘Now and Then’ by William Corlett

The ‘Tales of the City’ series and anything else by Armistead Maupin

‘How to be Lost’ by Amanda Eyre Ward

‘The Five People You Meet In Heaven’ by Mitch Albom

‘This Book Will Save Your Life’ and ‘The End Of Alice’ by A.M Homes

‘The Blackwater Lightship’ by Colm Toibin

‘What Was Lost’ by Catherine O’Flynn

‘Rose Madder’ and ‘Carrie’ by Stephen King

my websites

http://the-flashiest-fiction.blogspot.com    

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Self-publish with CreateSpace

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I wrote 1143 days ago

Hi Clare, I’ve just had a read of your first chapter. Like you, I’m writing in first person present tense, so I was keen to see how you wrote in this style. The writing is very smooth and immediate, but I found that there were some places where you were using full stops where I think a comma... view book

I wrote 1146 days ago

Hi Ruth, I really like your blurb for Family Snap (and the title is very good too). It’s really inspiring to read about your successes, by the way, so congratulations. Now, I’ve only read the first chapter so far, but I think it’s an excellent opener. The goal for the main character is clearl... view book

I wrote 1146 days ago

Hi Katrina, I’ve read your first chapter and love the original start to this book. Molly comes across as a warm, kooky character and I instantly felt connected with her. However, I was disappointed that she didn’t give the letter to Dribbly (!) as it seemed a perfect story opener. In a way, it f... view book

I wrote 1148 days ago

Hi Simon, After agreeing with many of your points in the forums this week, I thought I’d pop over and take a look at your novel. First things first, I think your writing is very polished, strong and evocative. The imagery is original and the prose is a pleasure to read. I make notes as I... view book

I wrote 1182 days ago

Hi Marian, How are you? Thought I’d pop back and have a look at your second chapter. I really like the idea, and I think you’ve got an excellent attitude to writing in that you’re keen to receive people’s feedback. I hope, then, that my comments don’t come across as harsh, but that you take them ... view book

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