Dear Terence, Okay, this is now the third time I have read this. The first time as a friend. The second as a bemused fan and the third as a critic. The critique will hopefully fuse the three very different perspectives and offer praise, criticism, admiration and areas for improvement. As I always... view book

I think this is a very important book and as a fellow writer for children, I can see how skilled you are. I only have one minor quibble and that's in your pitch. I do believe it's spelt 'adolescent' and not 'adolecent' as you have spelt it. I know it's a small thing but may make a difference should ... view book

I love the premise of this. The pitch could do with some work as could the prose. There are just a few too many grammatical/punctuation errors that prevent the reader from getting lost in your wonderful story. For instance, if we look at the pitch: 'Dr Gerald Thomas is a brilliant scientist has wor... view book

I would not normally be your target audience, but I have to say I really enjoyed what I read. It reminds me of a Bill Forsyth film. It's sweet, endearing and very accessibly written. I can't fault it. Carl The Time Hunters view book

I like the idea of using the blog format a lot. This is very engaging and sweet and I wish you all the best with it. I liked the rabbit website in chapter 2. Carl The Time Hunters view book