Ooh, delectable stuff with such coded, veiled, barbed dialogue. I really love it and wish I had time to read more than a couple of chapters. This is refreshingly different and with beautifully drawn characters. But!!! There was a very famous heroine who happened to be the governess and that was Jane... view book

HI Emma - I think this idea will appeal to lots of young adults and so you have a potentially very marketable idea. Good pitch and you've set the scene well, hooking the reader in, so nice work. Backed. Myffy (Expected) view book

Nicely set up with good scenes planted in the readers' minds. I am not a sci-fi fan at all and so it is important for me to be able to relate to the mc, which I could and did. I'm backing you because this is a difficult genre in which to shine. But you have. I wish you every success. Myffy (Expect... view book

This is really nicely done and highly enjoyable. My only tiny suggestion is that you don't need to use Piotr's name quite so often after you've introduced him and used it 2 or 3 times. You can go to 'he' so that the narrative flows smoothly. I hope you don't mind me mentioning that?? But it is so lo... view book

This is perfect chick-lit for the young, female market and you have a great idea with the blog. Likeable Tasha is a girl most will relate to and root for, and her problems are oh so true to real life. Well written too. I've only read the first chapter due to time constraints but will come back to it... view book