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Emily Rebecca

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I am a mother of two fabulous kids. Just moved to Burrillville, RI with my children and husband of six years. I have a BA in theater and creative writing from Rhode Island College.

**MOTHER OF MONSTERS is complete, but only part of it is being uploaded here for critique. Any comments would be appreciated.***

I am seeking an agent and can be reached via e-mail at:
ERMcKeon (at) gmail (dot) com
OR
Emmybecka (at) yahoo (dot) com


I'm on Twitter! Find me under ERMcKeon.

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In an effort to actually help the books I feel are deserving of the ED I will be doing a monthly bookshelf. All books that I have backed or plan to back will remain on my w/l and will be shelved accordingly. Please do not ask me to back your book. Asking me to read your novel is fine and I will always try to return any reads I receive.

favourite books

The Thursday Next series and The Nursery Crime series by Jasper Fforde, The Princess Bride

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my books

Mother of Monsters

E. R. McKeon

Gods don't die. They wait.


Hera won’t let go of her grudge against those who forgot her. To make sure it never happens again, she comes up with a plan to keep her name in everyone’s minds and on everyone’s lips. With Maya’s help, Hera plans to bring back the monsters of ancient Greece to keep mankind in line. Too bad for Hera, Maya doesn’t want to follow the rules.


Angry over what Hera plans to do with her children, Maya arranges to upset the Goddess’ plans. Teaching them about loyalty, Maya plants the seeds of rebellion in each monster she creates, except for her very first son.


Raised solely by Hera, Ercole knows no other law but hers. He never questions what he’s told by Hera and spreads her message of death and destruction. Maya needs to stop him before what’s left of humanity is wiped out in the name of a vengeful goddess.

 

Down the Wooded Path

E. R. McKeon

Cindy Smith needs to figure out what is real and what is make-believe and she doesn't have much time.


What would you do if your parents named you Cinderella? Some girls would embrace it. Some would flaunt it. Some, like Cinderella Smith, would count down the days until they could legally change it. Saddled with what she considers an unfortunate and cruel name, Cindy, as she insists being called, avoids dancing, dresses and make-up.

But her attitude changes when her dreams start to include a cottage in the middle of the woods and a grandmotherly woman straight out of a fairytale. Haunted by these childhood stories at night, Cindy’s waking life begins to mirror them. Before she knows it, she’s agreed to go to her high school’s Spring Fling with her best friend, Benny Gordon.

With Benny's help, will Cindy finally live up to her unusual name or will she miss out forever when the clock strikes midnight?

 

What the Whole Town Knew

E. R. McKeon

Dale has pushed Lizzie one time too many. Now she's pushing back.


Dale regularly comes home drunk and abusive towards Lizzie and Lizzie has had enough. In a moment of terror, she kills him and covers it up. In a town as small as Cloverton, getting away with murder isn't easy. Is her story as solid as she believes or are the whispers and gossip going to uncover the truth? This is a first draft. I am looking for feedback on style and content to determine whether or not it's working. Thank you!

 

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Master Bowman Lucas wrote 4 days ago

Some new chapters are up! http://www.authonomy.com/books/43469/fre....

Casimir Greenfield wrote 14 days ago

Hi Emily - just extending the hand of friendship. I'm fairly new....

karenrosario wrote 14 days ago

Thanks for thinking of me, that's very kind of you! I will take a loo....

Cyrus Hood wrote 14 days ago

thanks Emily Cyrus

Mademoiselle Nobel wrote 31 days ago

Hi Emily, MOTHER OF MONSTERS sounds absolutely fantastic! And I LO....

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I wrote 77 days ago

Edited comment: The repositioning of Capritare's return from oblivion makes the beginning flow much better and creates a nicer hook. Onto the next chapter! :-) Original comment: My thoughts on the first chapter: First of all, your writing is beautiful. Your descriptions are well done and... view book

I wrote 126 days ago

Paul, Finally had a chance to take a look at this. I like your style and the story. Some things that bothered me. (Only my opinions, so take as you will. ;-) ) "..lashing tornado" hit me as a little off. Lashing could be dropped without losing anything. "Countless moments..." "Tears ha... view book

I wrote 350 days ago

BHC on the first couple of chapters: Plot - Engaging and enough mystery to keep the reader's interest. I'm wondering exactly what happened with Sam and why Coo lets it influence her the way it does. Pacing - seemed pretty even. I was thrown a bit at the beginning with the going back and fort... view book

I wrote 368 days ago

Natalie, I love what I've read so far. I know you have it listed as 'ChickLit' but it definitely feels like more than that. Telling it from Adam's POV I think helps it break out of that category. The marriage refusal is every guy's worst nightmare (or so my hubby told me shortly after I accepted... view book

I wrote 372 days ago

Hi Will -- here's my return crit for the Alliance. Use what you can and disregard the rest. ;-) Not going to do any critiquing on grammar or spelling type things. I know this is still being worked on and I'm sure any of that type of stuff has already been pointed out. ;-) First of all, I l... view book

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