Writing about bots seems cliche. Sorry but SciFi is not my genre. view book

This was hard to follow and made little sense. view book

You obviously love your cat but your story needs alot of work. view book

This is a very odd book. I thought I was a census taker. It reads like vital statistics, not a novel. Using "usual unusual" is a bit daft. You should pick betters adverb. I had to do a double take. I didn't get the plot of the story in the beginning. I had to read awhile to find out what the pur... view book

I read many books on here and this is the first I've ever read of this type. It was new and refreshing. The story line is fresh. I couldn't match it with any other story already written. You are quite creative. Your characters are original and well done. Very well written. Ch1 The beginning h... view book