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RebeccaT

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first registered 10.05.10

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Dear colleagues.

It's hard being a writer, looking for a helping hand up the never-ending ladder to recognition.

I don't read romance or drama, my favourites are sci-fi, Steampunk, and crime thrillers.

I won't lie to you if you ask for a comment or-and a critique.

But I will offer advice.

favourite books

The girl with the dragon tattoo trilogy by Stieg Larsson.

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HarryLang wrote 31 days ago

Hi Rebecca, I hope you're well. I just wanted to offer up 3 sound re....

Paul Burrard wrote 34 days ago

Rebecca, I wondered if you might be interested in reading about Usha....

patio wrote 35 days ago

I write with greetings and invitation to read a chapter or more of my....

Marita A. Hansen wrote 35 days ago

Hi, Rebecca. I've got a book uploaded called "Graffiti Heaven." It's ....

Melissa Writes wrote 38 days ago

Hi Rebecca, I notice you like crime stories - would you be intereste....

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I wrote 48 days ago

I read the prologue, I found it wordy and too long. I read the first chapters but couldn't get interested even though the dialogue was fairly good. The story is well-written apart from a few errors, an oxymoron for instance: "A howling breeze." Your sentence structure needs working on tho... view book

I wrote 50 days ago

You need to work on your sentence structure and punctuation, as your style is jumbled and not an easy-flowing read. I only read the first chapter, and if this is an indication of the rest of your story then you have a long way to go to finding a publisher. I couldn't gather much from it besides t... view book

I wrote 53 days ago

Well, your style is nothing exceptional, as your story is something that can happen to a girl anywhere in the world, and I hope it developes into something exceptional, and considering how you write I don't think you will have much difficulty. My advice is: Delete all your adjectives and adverbs an... view book

I wrote 53 days ago

Well, your style is nothing exceptional, as your story is something that can happen to a girl anywhere in the world, and I hope it developes into something exceptional, and considering how you write I don't think you will have much difficulty. My advice is: Delete all your adjectives and adverbs an... view book

I wrote 60 days ago

"Shutdown" is a noun, "shut down" is the verb. One annoying thing, she tells us she is usually a kind person, how do we know that, we only have her word for it? Let us judge her by her actions and not by her self-opinion. So, shortness of breath and wide eyes depicts excitement!!? Stick... view book

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