Saw this on a few shelves of a people I correspond with on this site and thought I'd have a look. I read a few chapters and I really love this idea. WL and starred fully. Will shelve as soon as room pops up :) Blessings! Jacki The Causter view book

Looks like this continues to rise! yay :) Still plan to some back and read more, will def comment again when I do. Blessings! Jacki view book

Dina, Your writing is professional and your characters are real. I love how it didn’t take long to get to know them. I feel like I understood each one by the end of the first chapter. Authonomy chap 1: For me, there are two problems I see in ch1. The dream sequence as your prologue is clic... view book

Hi Diana! Read through chapter 3, great writing all around. Firstly, I would reconsider a dream sequence as your opening. Not having read your other comments, I am willing to bet someone has already mentioned that. Dreams and describing the weather (as openings) are two things that publishers... view book

I really don’t have anything negative to say about what I read. You have obvious talent. A few things I wanted to share: ‘Over time, most people got used to the smell of prosperity, one of the innumerable perks of living in the Big City. He was not one of them.’ I love this paragraph. But what I ... view book