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Mother Knows Best is a story of exploration, wonder and mystery. The protagonist is a scientist and does what they do; he finds things out and tries to make sense of them.

So, meet him as he finishes his training, catch up with him years later when he meets his significant other, agonize with him as he faces contradictions and travel with him to exotic locations seeking the truth. Finally, join his team as curiosity forces him to break the law and uncover the truth that threatens to rewrite history.


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Mother Knows Best

Peter T. Allen

In the far future a scientist tracing human migration uncovers strange anomalies that threaten to rewrite the history of both science and religion.


"Science is a way of thinking much more than it is a body of knowledge" - Carl Sagan

Science has remained unchanged for centuries as received wisdom. As a ‘New Scientist’ who rejects that view Peae becomes fascinated that people seem to have always migrated east. He travels the globe seeking records of original geographical discovery. In the eastern capital he falls for fellow scientist Adrena and is introduced to the archive of the powerful Motherene religion. But he finds that even the most famous explorations appear to have been preceded.

Could people have been around for much longer than usually thought? Science has an explanation for the origins of humanity but so do the Motherenes.

 

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I wrote 177 days ago

Dreams Change Short pitch: seems fine Long pitch: this also seems OK though that last sentence is way over the top compared with the tone of the rest of it. I wonder if these dark memories need more of a place in the selling pitch – they seem a bit of an afterthought at the moment. Main tex... view book

I wrote 177 days ago

The Milieu Principle Short pitch: misses a trick I think. It reads OK but doesn’t even suggest the tension that you then describe in the Long version. Maybe a hint of that would be good. Long pitch: It’s too long and discursive. I’m no good at pitches but I do know they are simple selling devi... view book

I wrote 177 days ago

QUEEN OF DIAMONDS Short pitch: I actually think you’ve missed a trick here; this SP actually gives no hint at all about the content of the story. I can see from the Long version that there is plenty of meat to the story so it would be a good idea to put the juiciest bit up in the SP. Long pitc... view book

I wrote 180 days ago

Prisoner Within Please remember that all critique is subjective and only one reader’s view. Short pitch: I see before I begin reading that you are treating a hard subject so I think you need to be careful not to labour the point. Your SP works well enough. Long pitch: In contrast the LP nee... view book

I wrote 182 days ago

The Peacekeepers Short pitch: It’s OK, though I was just a trifle bothered by the phrase ‘travels to depths of her soul’. Sounds a bit too much. Long pitch: It’s definitely too wordy. A pitch is just there to grab the reader’s attention; yours sort of meanders through all these plot elements. ... view book

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