Chapter 1 review This is a really dramatic start to the story and I couldn't see any gramatical errors. I am somewhat concerned that Andrea doesn't say or do much in this chapter - If Derek is aware of the fate of the guys on the news than Andrea would also know she is due to get raped and woul... view book

Chapter 1 - very powerful scene - short yet it has given us an insight into the kind of life she led. I also like the way she is not named nor any details of who she is or what her situation is at this point which entices us to go deeper I shall read onwards - I shall be honest and sincere yet bru... view book

I can see this is going to take a while to read - I've finished the first chapter an it is captivating I am backing it and I'll let you know what I think of the rest of it as I get through it Best Wishes Brian Ritchie (Diamonds) view book