Faine

Faine

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first registered 06.02.10

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about me

Father. Husband. Teacher. Writer. Necessarily in that order.

Will reciprocate any backing, and will give my honest opinion to those who are looking. Lastly, will exchange reads, chapter for chapter, if you are in need of a fresh eye. I'm brutally honest in the nicest way possible. Just let me know.

favourite books

Fight Club, The Things They Carried, A Song of Ice and Fire (Series), To Kill a Mockingbird, House of Leaves, The Road, East of Eden, Song of Kali, The Long Walk

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my books

Time of the Overmen: Of Mice a....

Kevin M. McGreer

"X-Men" meets "Sopranos" meets "Escape from New York".


In the wake of the Event, all that remains of the Chicago Loop are the ruins of a once thriving city, now a militarized zone called Hades Ring by the survivors quarantined within, forced to face the terrors lying in wait for them when darkness falls.

But there are some, armed with paranormal and supernatural abilities, who will fight for more than survival.

For their time has come.

 

The Fall of Jasper McCaine

Kevin M. McGreer

A father pleads guilty to a crime he didn't commit in order to reach a killer in prison and avenge his daughter's death.


THE FALL OF JASPER MCCAINE is a 60,000 word literary novel spanning (mostly) the early to late seventies, before the advent of the Internet, DNA testing, or any other modern accouterments of the digital age to aid in the protagonist’s search for justice. It is a story of one man’s harrowing journey and sacrifice to make things right and an intimate portrayal of losing one’s humanity in the process.

In the search for his daughter’s killer, Jasper McCaine will face a corrupt small town sheriff, track down heroin dealers preying on the innocent and guilty alike, cut deals with immoral inner-city gang members, and work for a Chicago crime family, eventually sacrificing his freedom so that he can be incarcerated with the oftentimes cunning and treacherous inmates of a maximum security prison in his quest to get ever closer to reaching the man who took everything away that mattered most to him in this world.

 

World War Me

Kevin M. McGreer

"Catcher in the Rye" meets "Dante's Purgatorio"


It started with the shadow-birds, dark messengers with wings.

Now Jack is dead, but not over.

Imprisoned with the other lost souls in an asylum-like afterlife, he must fight the powers that be, and his own inner demons, to keep what remains of his sanity.

But to what end?

His freedom?

Or his damnation?

 

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I wrote 636 days ago

Plot-driven and riveting from beginning to the end of the first chapter, Ida. I can tell this has been a labor of love for you and it shows. The narrative and the story move along at a surprisingly brisk pace for a medical drama/thriller/true story. This is well-researched and well-written. My o... view book

I wrote 659 days ago

Suggestions for the pitch in brackets: “Silent Storm” [delete comma—no pause, added quotes to indicate title] tells of the mammoth struggle [deleted “s” from “struggles”—awkward] that ensues [changed “ed” to “s”] after Dr. Kyle Burton [deleted “of Idaho”—Location is irrelevant to the idea you wan... view book

I wrote 661 days ago

What can I say that hasn't already been said? I've read the praise and I've read the dissent. The themes, I'm sure you know well: "This story is one of the greatest I've ever read here," being one; "You suck (basically)," being the other. Now, I've read your work. It is monumental and disappoi... view book

I wrote 675 days ago

This is mostly very clean, lean, and well written. I’ve perused the others comments to see what I might add or suggest, and have to agree that for the most part, this is heading in a professional direction, but suffers a little bit from overwriting. An easy fix, with an objective edit. It is ... view book

I wrote 692 days ago

It's very well written, not at all what I expected (wasn't sure what I expected exactly, but this, somehow, was not it). I like the playful banter between the couple; makes them seem as if they really know each other without the artificial encroachment of a bunch of needless exposition. It's also ... view book

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