This is not my normal cup of tea but it's nicely written so I decided to pop it on my shelf. Apart from the odd spelling mistake ('Egggling' springs to mind) the only comment I have about the writing is that, like most of us, it is a little overwritten at times. I also felt there was a tendency to l... view book

Hi Joff I found the story engaging but there are times when I think the sentance structure could be improved. Also I thought the prologue lacked 'çonnection' as we don't know who is talking. When I first read it it sounded like it was you the author speaking. NOt sure how I would address this, if... view book

Hi Carla It seems you are only accepting messages from 'friends' but as you might have noticed I don't haveany friends Not that I'm antisocial. It's just that your messages get so flooded with friends updates that it's easy to miss important messages and worse still a backing. Nothing worse than re... view book

Hi Gordon Finally had a chance to look at the Harpist and cobble together some comments. I read the first chapter and the 11th as you suggested. On the whole I think the book reads quite nicely and it seems extremely well researched so I must commend you for that. However, I feel there were a numbe... view book

Hi John Only had chance to read a little of Other Face but I think you write really nicely. I liked the opening section and the way the scene is slowly revealed through Cravo's experience. I thought your stoccato style worked well but maybe it was a bit much at times, the first paragraph being a go... view book