Hi Moses, I know you only want constructive reviews but you haven't made it easy. Damn you and your fine writing :) It's rare a story slows my reading down to a level where I need to take everything in, and yours did this. I loved the way the sister was cast aside from her father in that one jar... view book

I see a lot of comments use the word 'Lovely' and for good reason because that is exactly how I would describe it. I love that it teaches in a charming and very funny way. I would definitely buy this for my kids. The characters are superb. Thank you for an enjoyable read. view book

I read the pitch and wasn't sure what to expect. I was pleasantly surprised. Your writing is easy flowing and doesn't come across harrowing at all, which is what I was afraid of. This will no doubt do well. Good Luck. view book

Hi Billie, I got my dictionary out and I needed it. Not a bad thing, I even needed it for the pitch, ineluctable. You obviously know your stuff and the scene was set beautifully. For me it was a litte heavy on the description but that could just be opinion. The story sounds fantastic and if you... view book

HI Michael, Loved the pitch and the writing is very accomplished. Quite a bit of narrative in the first chapter but I guess that is needed to build the scene in a murder mystery. Cream rises and you no doubt will get there shortly and well deserved. Little nitpick, at the end of your pitch you s... view book