Well, Karen, you asked so politely and kindly that I couldn't help but come take a look at your book. Boy am I glad I did! While I did enjoyed the first chapter, it was truly the second chapter that snatched my attention. Michael reminded me very much of my little brother, and the line where he s... view book

Hello Mary, You have a fascinating idea here which I'm really rather fond of! Your writing is good and solid, although it could use some polishing (who's can't use it, right?). I won't nitpick, but one thing I would suggest doing is going back through and noticing the amount of times you use th... view book

This isn't my usual sort of book, but you make history fun! Witty, humorous, this should do well. Best of luck to you! Warmest Regards, Alexis A. Hunter view book

"The age of the transhuman has begun!" What a wonderful, creepy, epic line! A perfect way to end your first chapter. This looks like a rather fascinating take on sci-fi, one that will get a large audience. Backed up by good, solid writing, there are very few things to nitpick about. Toward th... view book

There's something very manly about your writing, about your story--and not just because there's a lot of football! It's very well written. You've got a nice way of describing things without going into unnecessary detail--very to the point. You seem very comfortable with the subject, with the stor... view book