Hi Su, I like your writing style also. It works for me too. I like the format of your book very much. It pinpoints in time the progression of the narrative and that works well for me here. Thanks for pointing me in your direction,,,All the best with your book,,, MarkXX... magic view book

thanks Su. I will give Seasons a read. Mandy, many thanks,,,XX... view book

Thank you for posting this book. I'm so pleased that you start the first chapter with the 'action' while blending the place description in with the action. I like the structure of the first chapter - all I have had time to read at this time - I like the pace and the way that the characters are intro... view book

Hi Liz, Thank you so much for your kindness concerning PFR. I teach at a middle school as it happens and have shown many of the illustration and story ideas by a few of my pupils, so I suppose that Middle school is the age my tale start sat - hopefully enjoyed by the odd adult also. I am goin... view book

Thank you so much for the read. I don't know why I have those yellow bits at the end of a line - there are none on the upload. This is only a first draft manuscript at this time - I'm writing it at this time - about 220 pages in, There are going to be lots of re-writes and spell checks. Thanks a ... view book