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Cristy DeLange

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about me

I am living in a small village in the south of Ireland, together with my tabby cat Missy and Tommy the dog.
I am juggling my time between revising Mind Games and reading your books, well at least parts of them.

I am in the process of revising the book to bring more detail and professionality in the story. I'm also doing research because I Iike to know what I'm writing about if only on a general level, so we all can understand and perhaps relate to the protagonist. This way I hope to make the book more believable and professional.

I don't like people asking me to read or back their book, I will choose myself and so must you. English is not my first language so please let me know if anything is wrong gramatically. Where I come the people speak backwards.


About Mind Games;

Melcom wrote recently

Can I just say that your premise is one of the best if not the best on the site. It's what we're always being told about the publishing world that they are crying out for something different. You have it in bucketloads.

Carl urged me to come and read this and I'm stunned by the originality and the engaging writing.

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Melxx
Impeding Justice.

I really enjoyed this. The beginning is done just right and I liked that Anthony was introduced to us from his POV rather than May's. It has a better impact and we quickly get to know him and his state of mind. The introduction of the other important characters simultaneously, back and forth is also very effective.
Your writing is smart, precise and fluid.
Backed earlier and glad to read on.
Rakhi (Sir William...)

favourite books

I love Konsalik, Jules Verne, Steven King, Sidney Sheldon and others. I also like the old fashioned childrens books. A few Dutch one are; Dik Trom by Joh. Kievit, Snuf (can't recall by who) Was about a german shepard dog and his friends. W.J.G v.d. Hulst all the books.
Enid Blyton - The five detectives, all the books
I also like Greek mythology.

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Mind Games

Cristy DeLange

During a medical experiment Anthony Baker not only puts his own life but also that of others in danger.


A test tube containing a cure for various diseases in the brain goes missing from a lab in Los Angeles.

On the evening of the disappearance a young Latino is found dead in a car dump. When detective Sarah Wolters discovers that the victim is the son of Tabita Chandler’s boyfriend Jose Mendez, she takes the case personal.

Earlier that day in Amsterdam, Anika Jansen prepares herself to travel to the USA. Taking part in medical experiments in the Delphi clinic in LA, she hopes to recover from a brain tumour. Also on his way to Los Angeles is Anthony Baker; who is suffering from Schizophrenia and has sabotaged the new PAYE system of the Irish Health Service.

 

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Maple C. Freter wrote 240 days ago

hello Cristy :) you were one of the backers of "Between the Lines" be....

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Hello again Cristy, I hope you're getting everthing you wanted fro....

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I wrote 342 days ago

I really liked the scene with sister Theodosia. Imagine sitting or rather walking up and down a small cell and spending a couple of years without contact with the outside world, except for the monk. view book

I wrote 342 days ago

Excactely that's misspelled but who cares. Prozac and other drugs is an invention of the parmaceutical companies to fill their pockets. It also keeps the psychiatrists aflood, who otherwise will be out of work and in the ditch. I learned during my research that Kraeplin received $ 575,000 for resear... view book

I wrote 342 days ago

OOoh, that picture. You are one of so many people who are not believed. I know from experience that the words you've put down on paper didn't came out as easily as it seems here and that the process of writing have assisted you to become who you are now. view book

I wrote 342 days ago

I just commented on your book but I don't know what happened with it. I like your style it's easy to read, I even liked the prologue. Usually I skip prologues, but this one has dialogue in it so that makes all the difference. view book

I wrote 342 days ago

I agee with the comment below, the pitch seemed complicated. And at first I thought your style would be hard for me to read. However nothing was less from the truth. I enjoyed the first chapter, your writing flows really well. view book

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