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Though I have a BA in English, I've been working in IT the past 25 years. I wrote the Brickweavers based on a crazy idea for a fanciful technology I had for a while but never put words to paper until I entered NaNoWriMo. I made the story up as I went along and it's full of my notions about religion, technology, economics and the human condition. As I reviewed my favorite published book list, I realized that the Diamond and Cahill books were huge inspirations for the novel.

Chapters reorganized and book fully uploaded again, September 4, 2011.

Music to read The Brickweavers by...
"Blue Men of the Sahara" by Strength in Numbers
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favourite books

A Confederacy of Dunces by John Kennedy Toole
The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien
The Road by Cormac McCarthy
To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee
Perfume: the Story of a Murderer by Patrick Süskind
How the Irish Saved Civilization by Thomas Cahill
Guns, Germs and Steel by Jared Diamond

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The Brickweavers

J.F. Williams

The Thujwani have mastered the forces of magnetism and gravity but discord arises among their elite as they take the first steps toward empire.


Thujwa is a desert city, built from clay and mud, surrounded by walls, secretive, thirsty, and desirous of wealth. But it is also a place of cool breezes, improbably tall towers, plentiful water, bountiful farmland, and vehicles that traverse great distances in a few hundred heartbeats. That’s because the Thujwani long ago discovered the secrets of brickweaving: the laying of bricks in special patterns that manipulate the forces of magnetism and gravity. They have used this knowledge to gouge a world of comfort out of the desert, and to enslave others.

Jeppo is a brickweaver but a social pariah who is called to a rare journey outside the city walls. Joining him will be his new apprentice, a hapless youth named Kulkulla who had washed out in the other guilds. What they find on their trek will only be the first of many discoveries, including the secret of Thujwa's founding, the origins of brickweaving, the nature of the mud-clothed people who speak in a clicking language, and, ultimately, the part they'll play in a centuries-old struggle against injustice.

(Complete at 96,000 words).

 

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I wrote 11 days ago

I read through to the end of chapter 5 and I'll give you my impressions for what they're worth because I'm no expert. The setting descriptions are very good and could be cut and paste into a novel without much revision, if any. I wish more prose were written so simply and evocatively. The dialogue... view book

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I read through to the end of Chapter 2 and my overall impression is that this is an interesting story that is hobbled at times by confusing sentence structure. I think you need to give the chapter a good going over with an ear toward how the ideas and images flow and the order of their progression. ... view book

I wrote 88 days ago

I read all that was posted and I must say this is a brisk read. There is a lot of telling and questioning but it's not overbearing. Those sections last just long enough before the action or dialogue starts up again. Nicely done and well balanced. As an aside, I had an exchange earlier today with an... view book

I wrote 123 days ago

I'm on chapter 10 but I feel I shouldn't keep the author waiting to hear how much I'm enjoying this story. What starts out as a hard-boiled DEA procedural with a wispy supernatural undercurrent really catches fire when the MC, Dema, gets into trouble with the bad guys and her hidden potentialities r... view book

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So far, after four chapters, this is a well-observed study of young people training to do battle against a mysterious horde of robots. The dialogue sounds very natural without being inscrutable, the writing is confident and with minimilist but precise description. The MC is very distraught throughou... view book

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