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Born in Zimbabwe. Mother 3 times over. Divorced. Works in the Health System as a Mental Health Nurse in England UK. Would appreciate constructive feedback on my work that I completed in 1996 but have found no one to publiish it yet.

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The Pure Abscess

Desiree Kanengoni

Incensed and numb, she sold her body in exchange for food rations for her family’s survival. Gradually, the emotional abscess, dulled and flattened emotions.


She walked down the footpath that meandered to the once bubbling springs of water, now shallow and muddy, way beyond the hills. Drops of dew formed on the dry grass along the footpath. She gracefully strode on, bare feet. The skin on her feet hard and cracked from the loyalty of transporting her to places, kicked the dry wet grass, leaving a cooling and moistening sensation from the dew. The moisture gently caressed and removed the dust from the feet as they carried her emaciated frame through the hills and valleys of the north western countryside of Zimbabwe.

The sky was a blue carpet decorated with different shapes of white clouds floating aimlessly. At the far end of the horizon, a tinge of orange rays, punctuated by the yellow and violet reflections of the African sun, was the trailblazer to the end of the day. She took in with pain the fields as far as her eye could see. Thick forests and stretches of rich green fields in her memory, replaced by dry brown patchy land stripped bare of its vegetation stirred yet deeper heart ache. Skinny cattle, dragged hoofs desperately in search for fodder from the gold wilted grass.

 

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HECROW55 wrote 259 days ago

Hello Desiree, Just wanted to thank you for your comment concernin....

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Hullo there. I'm still a reader on Authonomy scouting for new authors....

j.l. wood-miller wrote 394 days ago

Hello Ms. Kanengoni: "An Unfinished Innocence" explores adulterous....

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I wrote 538 days ago

Very contemporary, young and real. I would buy your book for my daughter's christmas present! Well done. Would you care to check out The Pure Abscess and leave a comment as wellk as back it? Thank you Desiree. view book

I wrote 549 days ago

Your writing is fluent and paints a mental picture as you progress, which is what it should be when you write for children or anyone for that matter. I honestly can not think of anyting else to add except to wish you well and success! Thank you for your comments on The Pure Abscess. view book

I wrote 551 days ago

Gosh! you have the ability to conjure up some dark and heart pounding moments! Hats off to you. Will back as soon as there is space on my shelf. Thank you for backing the Pure Abscess! Have rated and watch listed yours. Best of good tidings! view book

I wrote 552 days ago

Only went through the first chapter. Very contemporary language and scene. Rivetting writing that spurs one on. I have rated your book. Would you kindly return the favour? Will place on shelf as soon as space is available. view book

I wrote 555 days ago

Thankyou Elijah for your encouraging words. Consider yours backed! view book

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