Well written, Bob. Full of satire, but what would we do without banks and the rest of government services. It seems in the world we live in they are a necessary evil. The trick is to stop them having too much power. All the best with your novel. I'll back it. Laurel www.authorsden.com/laurellampe... view book

It looks like it's going to be a thriller in the same mould as Indianna Jones. My one thought is for a first chapter you have introduced a lot of characters. I would lookto see if you could either delete some of move them forward into the book. Otherwise well written. I'll back it. Laurel www.au... view book

Well written, Susie, but what a horrific story. And what some women and their children had to put up with and are still putting up with with in some parts of the world. All the best with it. I'll back it. Laurel www.authorsden.com/laurellamperd view book

Well written, Susie, but what a horrific story. And what some women and their children had to put up with and are still putting up with with in some parts of the world. All the best with it. I'll back it. Laurel www.authorsden.com/laurellamperd view book

Well written chapter, Harold. It seems thrillers are always popular and North Korea is the latest bogeyman. My only thought with the first chapter is you have given a lot of information which slows the chapter down. Some of this information could be placed later in the book. You say 'The CIA was alw... view book