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I'm a failed writer from way back. The writing's hard but not as hard as finding a publisher. But, I still get the urge to ignore the pain of rejection and try again. God knows why!

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My full novel was here for almost 2 years. Dozens of members, perhaps, have read Chapter 1. Even more, maybe, have pretended to get that far. And Chapter 1 is little more than an introduction to the story, the style and two of the main characters.

So, I have taken down the full novel and now offer only Chapters 15, 16, 17 and 18 plus a very brief outline of the 'story so far'. I like to think that these 4 Chapters are more powerful examples of my work.

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A Confederacy of Dunces

Something Happened

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Sergeant Astley's Foote

Arthur Anthony

Read enough of crime, romance and childish wizards? Why not join Sergeant Jack Astley and colleagues on a riotous weekend with the Civil War Society?


Sergeant Jack Astley, a middle-aged policeman, invests all his spare time and money in boozy weekends with the Civil War Society. He is seriously deluded about his rank in the King’s Army (the Royalist section). His colleagues refer to him as ‘Mad Jack’ or ‘the Bishop’, the latter name based upon his religious fervour.


His unwilling family and colleagues have their own reasons for attending the Battle re-enactments. Constable Hubie Rimmer, the sergeant’s oldest friend, enjoys regular access to Mrs Dora Astley. A second younger constable, Vinnie Virgin, relies upon the sergeant for regular overtime and decent shifts at work.


Over a summer weekend, the Troopers prepare for and then re-enact the Battle of Edgehill. It soon becomes clear that the policemen are mixing with illegal elements, perhaps ex-miners, travellers or immigrants. As the Battle ends, Astley’s Foote prepares itself for a drunken, vengeful Saturday night.


The constables settle for drink, drugs and random violence, often against each other. The sergeant, unhinged by alcohol and spiked tobacco, turns into Sir Jacob Astley, his imagined heroic ancestor. For a few dangerous hours, he is back in the seventeenth century.


Finally, Sunday morning brings surprises which change all their lives.

 

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beegirl wrote 66 days ago

You started a thread??? Really? And such a great topic. Are you lo....

CGHarris wrote 109 days ago

Thanks so much for your support, I definitely appreciate it. I wish y....

CGHarris wrote 109 days ago

Death has been released upon the world, and it’s up to the three men ....

beegirl wrote 173 days ago

Are you behaving yourself? I'm back from my rather busy trip. I wi....

Ariom Dahl wrote 176 days ago

Thank you, Arthur, that's much appreciated ... and more because you l....

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I wrote 681 days ago

Tried first chapter - well-written, reminds me of Sue Townsend's stuff. Best of luck with it. AA view book

I wrote 735 days ago

You are obviously a very talented writer. I did find the first chapter something of an infodump but that may be due to my own preference for dialogue to advance plot and character. Nevertheless, the content was interesting and kept me reading on. And, I'm definitely not a talented critic. I gues... view book

I wrote 864 days ago

I'm not looking for readers/backers so you can take off WL. I've looked at your first chapter. Nice hook. I think you may have something commercial here. Good luck with it. AA view book

I wrote 913 days ago

A very smooth piece of work from which I learned a few new words (eg yottabytes). And, some good jokes, especially the more subtle ones. Mind you, you refer to a pi calculation as 'pointless.' Ha! There's always a point. I definitely think you have something here. Very impressive. Backed,... view book

I wrote 921 days ago

I don't usually read 'horror' so I stopped after Chapter One. That's quite a shocking ending with, I guess, more shocks to come. Fine writing. Can't fault it. Backed, of course. Good luck, I think it will go far. view book

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