Hi, This is great. The short chapters make it easy to read and there are some amusing scenes. I'll definitely be back to read more when time permits. You do have the odd missing comma and in chapter one you have a sentence containing the words 'who'd of guessed' which should be 'who'd have gue... view book

Hi Marija, This is much better than your other book in my opinion. Unfortunately, time prevents me from reading more than a sample but what I have seen looks to be well written and I was unable to find any errors. It's a good opening chapter which draws the reader in as it's meant to do. It's onl... view book

Hi Tyler, An interesting concept and of global interest and relevance. Also, sadly true. As I'm sure you know it won't appeal to everyone but many will find it interesting reading. It is, of course, more an essay than a story, and you do have a few typos. For instance, in chapter one you have ... view book

Hi A.B, I see you've managed to get to the top without needing my help. Cogratualtions and good luck with whatever happens next - hopefully, publication at some stage. It's easy to see why your story made it to the desk. It's great. Ron view book

Hi Harold, I'm afraid this story isn't for me. That doesn't mean there's anything wrong with it, it just isn't to my taste. In fact I was unable to spot a single error in the actual writing. One thing that did strile me though was that you opened the story by setting the scene. This does need ... view book