Hi Ronald, (Great Name), I've only had time to look at the first couple of chapters of this story. Overall, I believe you have a good story going here, and the chapters are nice and short making them easy to read. I found no grammatical issues apart from the odd missing comma, though your heading... view book

Hi Tony, I've only had time to read the first chapter, which is rather long. While in the real book chapters can be as long or short as you like, on forums like this, it is better to split into shorter sections as people are more inclined to read shorter pieces an, therefore, you would get more c... view book

Hi Elina, I enjoyed the prologue of this, but I'm afraid after that, the present tense puts me off reading. There isn't anything wrong with the story or the writing though, just the tense. I feel sure if you re-weote in past tense, especially as it is, after all, a historical, it would be more ap... view book

Hi Isobel, This is a nicely written and easy to read story and defintely desrves to be published. I wish I had the time to read more. I the poertion I did find time to read I found no errors, but I would introduce the name of the narrator earlier as it comes quite late into the chapter. As ... view book

Hi Rey, Many thanks for backing 'Double Murder' and for your encouraging comments. In answer to your question, yes, the book is available on Kindle. I will look at your book as soon as time permits. Ron view book