My favourite to win Mayhem. reckon you'll pip paint or the lost wink in the final. view book

Infinitely more readable than the previous three books I have read on the subject of growing world class giant pumpkins. view book

I’d start this with “After all the years he’d walked the earth, Devon still possessed…” It’s much more powerful. And that second sentence is awkward. It’s like a little prelude. And mother nature and temper tantrums is pretty maudlin. Otherwise the first chapter reads well and it’s a good story... view book

First off, the nearest thing I’ve ever read to a thriller is Great Expectations. No expert advice shall therefore be tripping off my tongue. The first chapter (or Prologue) is crafted with great skill and is fabulous storytelling –you create an electric tension between the two main characters an... view book

Can I body forth a bit of a rant first, Mr Cutley? Well, one of the things that strikes me about many of the books on this site is that they have a sometimes slight, sometimes strong whiff of having been manufactured for monetary gain. The subject matter has clearly been selected after a long stud... view book