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Nikki B

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I've been away for a while, but have put a new novel up on this site. It's called FOUR FIENDS and I hope you like it!! Please give me some feedback--I try to back everyone that backs me, and I try to read and comment as much as possible.

More about me: I live in Japan right now and am travelling as much as I can to get ideas for novels that cover a variety of cultures and mythologies. FOUR FIENDS covers a few of these, including Chinese, japanes, ancient Greek, Polynesian, and even a North American myth thrown in for good measure.

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Chronicals of Narnia
Harry Potter
Pillars of the Earth - Ken Follet
River God - Wilbur Smith

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FOUR FIENDS

Nikki Bennett

Their lives were fairly normal. Then they met the Worms.


When four children from very different parts of the world stumble upon an incredible secret, their fates become suddenly entwined. Jinjing, a lonely, lumbering girl from Hong Kong, Pietro, a gregarious and athletic Italian boy, Kate, a fiery redhead living in New Jersey, and Saburo, a Japanese boy struggling with a guilt he can’t overcome, all discover odd, glowing worm-like creatures that nobody but them can see.

As the creatures grow to an unbelievable size the children realize that their ordinary lives are about to take a very extraordinary turn. Their newfound pets transport them into an unparalleled journey through history and mythology as they attempt to stop four fabled fiends from conquering the world and sending everything into uncontrollable chaos. To succeed in their tasks they not only have to work together to surmount physical challenges, they must also confront and conquer their personal failures and fears.

 

A BEGINNER'S GUIDE TO DRAGON F....

Nikki Bennett

Forget everything you thought you knew about dragons. Here's the real scoop...


Human beings only got a couple of facts right about dragons and here they are:

1. Dragons are scaly.
2, Dragons breathe fire.

Everything else, they got wrong.


When Joe, Maggie, and Alistair find themselves transported into an entirely different world, they discover what dragons are really all about.. And while they're learning, they join forces with a mysterious knight, confront an evil sorcerer, find a hidden treasure, and restore a kingdom to its former glory.

But can they stop bickering with each other long enough to work together and save the kingdom? And can they find out enough about dragons to unlock the secrets they need to get back home?

 

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I wrote 590 days ago

Great dialogue anda fun read! I'm enjoying this immensely so far! Nikki B A BEGINNER'S GUIDE TO DRAGON FIRE and THE WORMS ARE COMING! view book

I wrote 590 days ago

Well-written. Full of messages, like others have already commented, but it feels natural and fits the story. I like your writing style, your dialogue and you capture Jim's emotions verywell. NikkiB. A BEGINNER'S GUIDE TO DRAGON FIRE and THE WORMS ARE COMING! view book

I wrote 591 days ago

You've got a great story here. It's humerous and witty and easy to read. I'm very glad I had just finished eating before I read the first chapter, or I'd be super hungry right now! And I like the way you switch your styles around--from writing first person straight to the lists, to the diary entr... view book

I wrote 591 days ago

Good story! Small critique--you switch from present to past tense in the first couple of paragraphs. You might want to change that, or you might have done it specifically (in which case forget the critique!) I think it would sound better though it if was all past tense. Nikki B. A BEGINNER'S ... view book

I wrote 592 days ago

Cut down your paragraph lengths! THey're really long, especially in the beginning, and it's just hard for most people to keep their focus if they have to deal with long paragraphs. THe shorter the better, I think, especially in kid's lit. Other than that, I like your writing, but I think if you c... view book

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