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FACEBOOK:
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Freeborn/366450776748589
www.facebook.com/capritare

BLOGS:
www.johnlucashargis.blogspot.com
www.johnlucashargis.wordpress.com

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FEEDBACK DISCLAIMER:

I am always up for a good, honest review swap.
But, before you agree...
Please scroll down to the right-hand side and check out some of "My Comments".

I will never leave a simple review that just says, "I love your book." I give honest feedback on both the good and the bad. So far, I have been receiving very polarized 80/20 split regarding the responses along the lines of either:

- "Thank you! This is exactly the kind of crit I've been looking for...", or

- "You think you're an editor, but you're not..." [Sometimes followed by a "revenge" review] ;)

Please check out a few of the comments. If this is the kind of feedback you're looking for, let me know and we'll journey onward from there.

Peace, love and hippie-$h!t
~Lucas

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I'm an artist, a writer, furniture designer & antique/industrial dealer

the many layers of Lucas - like a sweet Vidalia onion!

if I can't be passionate,
I can't be at all.

art makes me...
...well, it just makes me...

hate hypocrisy.
love honesty.
hate pretense.

I'm a lover.
not a fighter.
got hippie/gypsy blood pumping through these veins.

want my outside to match my inside.

love music.
love to think.
love the feeling of 'awe'.

hate [a lot of] vegetables.
love sugar.
mmm...sushi, coffee, mint

can't help but speak out when all other voices are silent.
always root for the underdog.
have a bit of a rebellious streak.

'juxtaposition' is my favorite word right now.

love travel.
want to go to Iceland.
my passport is active.
love people from the 'wrong' side of the tracks.
intensity is a trait of mine.

extremely creative.
discontent with the staus quo.
want to make a difference in the lives of others.

dub myself introverted.
others argue that i'm extroverted.

get compliments on my smile & my eyes.

for some strange reason, I seem to find favor a lot more than I'd expect.

speak my mind.
you always know where you stand with me.

TWITTER = @gypsyroots
EMAIL = john.lucas.hargis@live.com

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- FREEBORN is my current work-in progress. [This is the one craving backers right now!] It is an Urban/ YA/ Dystopian/ Sci-Fi novel set in the year 2214. It deals with the concepts of identity, overpopulation, consumerism, and nature fighting back against man's effort to control her.
Currently at 47k words and counting.


- CAPRITARE: Discovery is complete at 59K words
[It exists somewhere within the boundaries of my own newly created YA/Metaphysical/Fantasy genre.]

- CAPRITARE: Completion is currently in the final editing stages. Almost there...

- INTERSECT is currently simmering on the back burner. It is a fantasy/romance/quasi-historical hybrid set in the early 17th century. It features a gay male protagonist, and explores the concepts of identity, seduction & hidden lives.
Currently at 10k words and counting.

- Projects percolating in my subconscience:
(1) The sequel to FREEBORN.
(2) A series of 4 short-length novels following the escapades of a "Puer Aeternus" archetype MC


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The story and progression of the cover art for "Capritare: Discovery" can be found on the johnlucas Blogspot listed below.

favourite books

Fav authors: Madeleine l'Engle, Clive Barker, Ayn Rand, Mary Roach, Langston Hughes, Folks on the AWB Thread

Fav Music: CocoRosie, Florence + the Machine, Foster the People, Jay Brannan, Mike Doughty, The Moldy Peaches, Supersystem, TV Girl, Vampire Weekend

my websites

http://www.johnlucashargis.wordpress.com     http://www.johnlucashargis.blogspot.com

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my books

FREEBORN

John Lucas Hargis

The Surgeon Generals are liars. The lives squirming inside Katia and the other clones aren’t parasites. They’re bastard Freeborns.


Katia-2198-04 lives in a time of peace, prosperity, and perfect health. The so-called Common Good Era started 200 years ago when the Surgeon Generals declared cloning the mandatory means of reproduction. Mass-sterilization ensures its necessity. Gene selection ensures its success.


All is golden, until a parasite epidemic sweeps through the Commonwealths. Children, the elderly, women, men: no one is immune, including sixteen-year-old Katia. An infected boy, Adam, offers her asylum in a safehouse. The residents know the truth the Surgeons are hiding. The life squirming inside all those bellies isn’t a parasite at all. It’s a baby. A human one. A freeborn.


Katia struggles with the revelation that the creature inside her is not a monster after all. As her stomach swells, she joins the safehouse rebels in their plot to snatch control away from the Surgeons. The plan is risky, insane. It will affect every person on the planet.


The Surgeons will not give up control without a fight, but the future of the infected clones, and the freeborns they carry, depend on it. Adam and Katia are simply accelerating the process that’s already begun. The Common Good isn’t so good. It is time for a new era.

 

CAPRITARE: Discovery

John Lucas Hargis

Starting over can be a good thing--unless you've already lived a thousand lifetimes, and still can't get it right.


Oblivion. Rebirth. Failure. Oblivion.

Capritare has no idea how many times he has repeated this sequence, but he knows it is time to end it. He is summoned from the pain and darkness of oblivion, and thrust into a lush world with others seeking the same freedom.

Seven cycles spread out before them. Through each one, Capritare and his friends must fight, explore, solve puzzles, and find love. Just when they master one cycle, the next follows quickly behind it. Every reset brings a transformation of their bodies: the addition of wings, antlers, tentacles, and other mysterious embellishments.

As the final cycle approaches, Capritare discovers the secret to the freedom he longs for. He is faced with one last decision that will determine his fate. If he chooses correctly, he will be set free to journey onward to a new, thriving land. If he makes the wrong choice, he will return—yet again—to oblivion.

 

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Brian Bandell wrote 1 hour ago

I like your pitch for Freeborn. Are you interested in exchanging read....

Alexandra Davidoff wrote 13 hours ago

Congratulations on the twitter success yesterday. I read your blog po....

scavola wrote 1 day ago

Had some thoughts whilst reading. 1) if there're like 30 patients ....

HarrietG wrote 1 day ago

What a shame I'm not on facebook. And yes, I think recurring patt....

scavola wrote 1 day ago

My favorite typo is in ATL Engineering, instead of vicious c&*% I had....

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I wrote 19 days ago

I'm working on it! ;) I can't write it, type it, and upload it fast enough! Going away for a week. Expect at least 10 new chapters by May 18th! view book

I wrote 20 days ago

I'm just beginning to get into the story. One thing that strikes me right away is the overuse of exclamation marks. The baby's whole experience is an "!", so none of these are needed. [I stopped counting at 125 occurences in the first chapter alone...] They actually jar me out of the narrative at ea... view book

I wrote 28 days ago

Munch away! My off-Authonomy betas are digging on it hard! Enjoy. view book

I wrote 33 days ago

Thanks for the feedback, Kate. I've had two betas look over the first seven chapters, and a lot of their suggestions matched yours. The editing has already begun! New versions will be up by Tuesday. view book

I wrote 36 days ago

My question would be: How far did you read? One chapter. Takes a little more investment than that to get to the Tootise Roll center of any story. ;) view book

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