Nick, I’m revisiting this book, both as an obligation to the Fair Critter group and because I remember liking it quite a bit the first time ‘round. I had already read the first 20 chapters, so I started at 21. I’ll leave comments as I go along. ~It’s been over two months since I read this,... view book

RC, This is going to be more difficult than I thought. Coming in, I welcomed the open invitation to be critical, the opportunity to freely express my concerns with your story without worrying if the comments were welcome. And then I started reading. It’s almost as if this story was writt... view book

S.D. After reading four chapters, I’m a little torn. I think your narrative prose is great and the story zips right along. I think maybe that’s where I’m unsure. I was hoping to spend a little more time with the characters. Perhaps I had unfair expectations going into it, but I would have rat... view book

Bradley, This was fantastic. I have neither the time nor the current mental capacity to comment much beyond that. Let it suffice to say, I read the first five chapters and found nothing to complain about. Your characters really shine, your narrative has a distinct voice and I wouldn’t dream of... view book

Dave, As I read this, I kept asking myself why. As in, why did I keep it on my WL for so long without reading it earlier? Why isn’t my TSR higher so I could do more for you than spew praise? And, more importantly, why did I wait so late in the day to start reading this? It almost pains me to ... view book