Hello Isabel, I read through the Prologue and 1st Chapter,---you may want to include the Prologue and Chapter 1 together, just for the sake of keeping in order the Chapters per Authonomy, but that's minor --- I think the story is very well told with nothing more to be added. The prologue however... view book

This book's high ranking in such a short period of time says pretty much all needs to be said, but I will add that the story is brilliantly told and the dialogue is flawless; it should make it to the ED by the end of the year:-) --- Backed view book

This book's high ranking in such a short period of time says pretty much all needs to be said, but I will add that the story is brilliantly told and the dialogue is flawless; it should make it to the ED by the end of the year:-) --- Backed view book

A brilliant work of art that should captivate readers, regardless of race, sex, creed or religion; Truly a Universal read ---- Michael view book

Hello---welcome to Authonomy ---- Liked your book --- You need to break up your pitch into smaller paragraphs (too jumbled) --- and your title should just say "Sleepwalker" --- as I think that alone, is powerful enough to get the readers attention versus your current title --- The reader will know b... view book