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I began writing novels eight years ago. I knew nothing about creating characters, plotting, and viewpoint and my husband was sure I would quit after a few months. But I couldn't stop. I read every book on writing that I could find, and I practiced writing, read novels by other writers, and soaked up the information (though I can't always remember to use it). Now, four books later, I'm looking for feedback from other writers like me. I will gladly give feedback in return.

I live in Missouri with my retired husband and our three cats. Our children are grown. We like gardening, bike riding, hiking, and traveling.

Thanks to Bradley Wind for creating the cover design.

Email address: susansbooks37@yahoo.com

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Chameleon

Susan Finlay

Claire is a genius and mother living under a false identity within witness protection, and dealing with lies, danger, and a troubled school.


A professor, Claire Constantine, is too honest for her own good. She reported a crime, which made her the prime witness and forced her into witness protection to protect her young son. Later, she discovered her need for honesty would conflict with the program’s motto ‘lie or die’.

That conflict caused her to make mistakes, necessitating several start overs. For her third, and hopefully final move, she's transferred to Denver and given a job she feels unqualified for--that of principal in a troubled high school. The odds quickly stack up against her: the school board resents her, the faculty snubs her, and students are as dangerous as the scumbags she's hiding from.

Claire works on reforming the school but fears it's a losing battle. Complicating her situation, she discovers that someone is watching her son and his nanny. She tries to get the U.S. Marshal handler her case to move her again, but he won't. Her one bright light is school superintendent, Steve Jensen. He helps her and even defends her against the school board. Eventually, she faces a moral dilemma: continue lying, and betray people to protect her son, or tell the truth no matter what.

 

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Goonerpat wrote 5 minutes ago

Thanks Susan. My courses are finished so have some spare time now. Ho....

Dean Lombardo wrote 1 day ago

I am doing OK. Suffering from a concentration problem. Gotta try to m....

James Hardy wrote 2 days ago

glad you've decided to stay for a while :)

TheImpeccableEditor wrote 2 days ago

I haven't been to Columbia but a friend (an occupational therapist) l....

TheImpeccableEditor wrote 2 days ago

hi Susan, and congrats on the rewrite! I'll be happy to back your boo....

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I wrote 11 days ago

Hi Phil, Sorry it took me so long to comment. I've read the first three chapters. This is dark and very original. It took me a while to get used to the style because the way you handle dialogue is different, but once I got used to it, I liked it. There's plenty of action here, and conflict. Good ... view book

I wrote 11 days ago

Hi Olive, I read the prologue and first seven chapters of Borrowed Light. It's been a while since I read this the first time and I'm glad I came back to it. I absolutely love the prologue. The description of the elderly Ruth seen through her care-giver's eyes was perfect and set-up the frame for te... view book

I wrote 11 days ago

Hi Sarah, I've read all seven chapters. This is very scary. The characters, Kaleb and Dinah, are very intelligent, strong, and likable and I'm rooting for them. Your scenes are active and tense, your descriptions vivid with strong word choices and the right details. I'm wondering what kind of creat... view book

I wrote 14 days ago

Zara, This is a fascinating story. It was so easy to be drawn in by Beth. She's insecure and tough at the same time. At first I wasn't sure if she was just paranoid about her Tariq having an affair, but when she got hold of his cell phone and he was pounding on the bathroom door it was scary. And... view book

I wrote 16 days ago

Hi Julie, The first three chapters are really gripping. This is a scary and interesting glimpse into life in poverty. I'm not familiar with this estate in the U.K. (I'm American), but I can easily relate it to similar estates in Chicago or New York City. I don't usually like when writers dip ... view book

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