"You almost feel like you have your hands over your eyes as you are reading." Harper Collins Review. Take that sentence Lynn - hug it to your heart - it is proof your book is EXACTLY what it should be for its genre! Bravo! view book

I like the slight distancing of the story by your use of past tense. I think if you made this more immediate using the 'show not tell' technique so many are mentioning - this story would become too painful both for you to tell it and for the reader who is aware that this is true and not some sensat... view book

I've just read the 1st three chapters to my son (19) who recognised all the issues as ones he had to deal with when he started school - obviously from a human POV - he loved the human version of basketti. Things became clearer when I saw one of your favourite book was Five Dolls in a House - I am ... view book