JD, I've read a couple of chapters of Destiny or Choice, so here is your BHCG review. You're very imaginative, that's clear. Your bio mentions wanting to be a storyteller, which I think is key to being a good author. You've obviously got a story in mind, and it's an interesting experience as... view book

Bradley, this is your BHCG review of Bulb. First, as I'm sure you have heard from others, the Archive concept is the master conceit at the center of your piece. It is a wonderful machine, both as invention and as literary device, allowing you to explore various scenes with some impunity. I love... view book

Emmett, I've checked out the refurbished first four chapters, and you've done some strong work here. Les has more depth now - he's sicker, and also has a little background in law. It's a tough line to straddle, making his interest and facility with political issues believably robust without jeo... view book

Katherine, I've taken a look at the first few chapters of Strata, and there's a lot here I like. You're very imaginative, and have clearly put a lot of work into building the subterranean world your characters inhabit. I love punplay in the right situation, and think it especially works with 10... view book

Emmett, I've worked my way through chapter 16 today. I have a lot of thoughts, some of a technical nature (word choice, etc) that I can outline separately, but I wanted briefly to focus on big-picture stuff. First, I'd be careful about making Les too good, too pure, too likable. It makes him... view book