Hello J.M. Having read through the first chapter, I could readily see that you have a beautiful gift gift for poetry. I especially enjoyed the sad irony of "The Novel You Read Last Summer." My suggestion is that, rather than partially uploading as you did and then padding chapters 2 and 3, th... view book

Hello Dena: I read through much of the first chapter and found the developing story to be quite delightful. My first impression, based on the simplicity of the language, is that this novel might be best marketed as young adult. I'm not sure who your target audience is, but if that be the case... view book

Hello David: At your invitation I read Made for Man. Although I did not grow up observing the Sabbath, I am part of a body of believers who were raised in Adventism, for whom the seventh day Sabbath is deeply ingrained in their culture. Naturally, by virtue of joining with their lives, I, too, ha... view book

Hello Daniel: You are truly a prolific poet and it is clear that you have a poetic gift. I enjoyed the rhythm, meter and rhyme of your work. That being said, I have some suggestions: 1. Get rid of the meter counts at the end of each line. The numbers are extremely distracting and downgrade the... view book

Hello Pauline: I read the first few chapters of "Lord Jesus Christ, You Are Lord of Everything." It is clear that you have put a lot of work into writing this book and I agree doctrinally with the themes that you are communicating, but I have identified some possible reasons that the book has mov... view book